Hey Professor,
Heres my final version of the paper that we got to do for class. I hope you like it. I pulled an allnighter to get this in on time. Zzzz : (
Give me a shout if ya think I should change anything. But dude, IMHO I gotta say that this one is off the hinges!!!
Later,
Your favorite student ;)
Why is this message ‘poor’ or ineffective?
This message is ‘poor’ because it’s lacks manners and morals. First of all, it is inappropriate to call your professor “dude”. The student stating that he pulled and all-nighter does not interest the professor, it was s the student’s responsibility to complete the assignment on time. The message is unprofessional and completely inappropriate.
