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13-11-2020
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what does my teacher mean by this

Good job on your thesis but your (bridge did not really connect your ideas smoothly).

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vindiesel76 vindiesel76

13-11-2020

Answer:

you did good but you need to use transitions or organize them

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myathornton24 myathornton24

13-11-2020

Answer: your teacher means that your topic(thesis) is very good but your key points( evidence to support your claim)f are either not supporting or there getting of topic,which is making your writing sound choppy.

Explanation: hope this helps:)

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